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  • huddahell
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    22 April, 2013 at 14:27
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    Good day, Sirs & Mams! Can you please tell me if there’s an error to this sentences or lyrics? Thanks, everyone. Here are some of it:

    Is there anybody who do can tell how the world works?
    Now, I’m an addict, do desire those love and dreams…
    Drunk with delight, I got miserable life…
    ‘Cause God put enmity between good and evil…

    dan
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    23 April, 2013 at 5:23
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    Reply To: (Help!) Am I creating a correct sentence or lyrics for a son

    I would suggest a couple of changes:

    Is there anybody who can tell me how the world works?
    Now, I’m an addict, I do desire those loves and dreams…
    Drunk with delight, I’ve got a miserable life…
    ‘Cause God put enmity between good and evil…

    huddahell
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    23 April, 2013 at 18:04
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    Reply To: (Help!) Am I creating a correct sentence or lyrics for a son

    Thank you very much, Sir.

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